Creating my Opening to Engage the Audience

I will open the film with an establishing shot of a small woods at night. I will then introduce two of the main characters, who are arguing in the middle of these woods. It is unclear what they are arguing about, for no specific details are being told (e.g, "how could you?"). Eventually one of the characters leaves angrily, leaving the other character on her own. She then looks at the time and decides she should maker her way home. A POV shot will be used in a bush behind her, she does not notice that anyone else is there. She feels like she is being followed throughout her walk out of the woods, however, and this is shown by her looking behind her constantly and holding onto her handbag tightly. Eventually she will make it out onto the street, and she starts to walk/run home, starting to panic as she gets paranoid about what is behind her. This will be shown by tracking shots and panning shots. She makes it to her driveway and is just about to reach the front door when the POV shot of someone behind her comes up towards her quickly. She turns around and yells, only to see that there is no one there. She looks around the driveway quickly before getting in her house quickly and slamming the door. Cut to black.